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Don't take it as an offense, but as a critique. You can opaque it, since smoke is able to be seen through at points.
Other than that (as to not get your FG's pissed) great job!
I appreciate your critique *3*
If you would like to help us, send me an mess, bye.
sorry T_T
If I may nit-pick a little, the hole in the clouds *just* aligned with the hole between two locks of her hair looks a bit off.
it`s a big fail XDD
and thank you!^_^